Are the commas in the right place in this sentence? My brain has turned to mush and I can't concentrate on punctuation any more.
"Postmodern literature seeks to examine the modes of being of literature and books, the ways in which seemingly concrete patterns and rules of genre and structure have evolved and can be altered and, recognising that we exist in an age of lost innocence where creation ex nihilo has become an impossibility, how these established genres can be manipulated to one’s own end and played with in order to highlight oversights perceived by postmodern writers in the texts they seek to rewrite."

I'll be a lot happier in 19 days.
( LimeyTreat Bitch. Lover. Child. Mother. Sinner. Saint., Thu 14 May 2009, 11:02, archived)

I got two words into that, looked ok up to then

( Gilgamesh gazed in wonder as Frampton came alive, Thu 14 May 2009, 11:03, archived)

cheers ok forum banter great
no offence
( LimeyTreat Bitch. Lover. Child. Mother. Sinner. Saint., Thu 14 May 2009, 11:03, archived)

if you were a bloke I'd say you're in dire need of a blowjob right now

( Gilgamesh gazed in wonder as Frampton came alive, Thu 14 May 2009, 11:06, archived)

I would say it needs splitting up into several sentences. It's awfully long.

( RR I love you ... in a way, Thu 14 May 2009, 11:04, archived)

It makes me look cool and academic, no?
No it doesn't. Oh dear.
( LimeyTreat Bitch. Lover. Child. Mother. Sinner. Saint., Thu 14 May 2009, 11:08, archived)

Long sentences are good in academicky stuffs
It make good. Me like.
( Theoban What of it, Thu 14 May 2009, 11:10, archived)

if I were you
I'd shout "PISSHOLES TO THIS BOLLOCKS" then go and get drunk right now
( Gilgamesh gazed in wonder as Frampton came alive, Thu 14 May 2009, 11:13, archived)