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# Feedback on my short film:
Hey guys.

Just recently joined but was wondering if you would mind giving some feedback on my short action film?

www.youtube.com/watch?v=VW_iGLqTrrU

Thanks.

Nick.
(I helped save b3ta! Newcott, Tue 4 Jan 2011, 22:16, archived)
# uh oh
links is thataway dude/noob/spammer ----
(JoePesky, Tue 4 Jan 2011, 22:18, archived)
# Sure.
Here's the thing, I'm 30 seconds into the film and I'm still seeing credits for cunts I've never heard of and couldn't care less about.
So I've stopped watching.
(I helped save b3ta! mofaha ┐( ˘_˘)┌ ʅ(́◡◝)ʃ, Tue 4 Jan 2011, 22:18, archived)
# .
Hello new person. Please read our FAQ. Cheers.
(I helped save b3ta! Laice , was Rogitating on, Tue 4 Jan 2011, 22:19, archived)
#
My first post was a massive pic of Mel Gibson, got slated!
(Mattyla "will make you moist" at, Tue 4 Jan 2011, 22:21, archived)
# In fairness,
that's Mel's fault, not yours.
(I helped save b3ta! mofaha ┐( ˘_˘)┌ ʅ(́◡◝)ʃ, Tue 4 Jan 2011, 22:22, archived)
# here's some feedback
*EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE*
(I helped save b3ta! drbroon abloooobloobloo, Tue 4 Jan 2011, 22:22, archived)
# I'd rather watch Star Wars.
(I helped save b3ta! atomic A-bomb-a-nation, Tue 4 Jan 2011, 22:23, archived)
#
Not intentionally spamming just keen to know what people think. Simple as. My apologies if in the wrong place for feedback.
(I helped save b3ta! Newcott, Tue 4 Jan 2011, 22:25, archived)
# Try /links
But don't delete the thread here. Just pretend it didn't happen and read no further...
(I helped save b3ta! Jimbuktu See? Right here, Tue 4 Jan 2011, 22:26, archived)
# Dude I was serious.
Put the credits at the end. You'll get more views.
(I helped save b3ta! mofaha ┐( ˘_˘)┌ ʅ(́◡◝)ʃ, Tue 4 Jan 2011, 22:27, archived)
# I should mention
I'm a top film producer and stunt man. And a model.
(I helped save b3ta! mofaha ┐( ˘_˘)┌ ʅ(́◡◝)ʃ, Tue 4 Jan 2011, 22:30, archived)
# Yes, but you're only a hand model
(I helped save b3ta! mediocre ha ha ha, you're reading this, Tue 4 Jan 2011, 22:32, archived)
# and a key-grip
(I helped save b3ta! drbroon abloooobloobloo, Tue 4 Jan 2011, 22:33, archived)
# i used to be a key grip
(I helped save b3ta! mictoboy shitting in your cunt since, Tue 4 Jan 2011, 22:39, archived)
# the only thing i know about key grips is what i read in Naked Gun credits
(I helped save b3ta! drbroon abloooobloobloo, Tue 4 Jan 2011, 22:45, archived)
# in the UK, grips have nothing at all to do with lighting or set construction
www.ehow.co.uk/about_6697585_job-description-key-grip.html
(I helped save b3ta! mictoboy shitting in your cunt since, Tue 4 Jan 2011, 22:50, archived)
# Did you have a best boy?
(I helped save b3ta! mofaha ┐( ˘_˘)┌ ʅ(́◡◝)ʃ, Tue 4 Jan 2011, 22:52, archived)
# only once
and i didn't like him
(I helped save b3ta! mictoboy shitting in your cunt since, Tue 4 Jan 2011, 22:53, archived)
# I have learned something today
it sounds fun
(I helped save b3ta! drbroon abloooobloobloo, Tue 4 Jan 2011, 22:52, archived)
# it is
if a little competitive and political
(I helped save b3ta! mictoboy shitting in your cunt since, Tue 4 Jan 2011, 22:55, archived)
# It's a start.
They've promised me some arm work soon.
(I helped save b3ta! mofaha ┐( ˘_˘)┌ ʅ(́◡◝)ʃ, Tue 4 Jan 2011, 22:43, archived)
# I thought you were WikiMan!
(I helped save b3ta! PedroHin My car pal tuna's synth drum, Wed 5 Jan 2011, 0:23, archived)
# I'm a multi-faceted individual, Pedro.
Did I tell you about my job at the BBC? You know all those missing words, spelling errors, and run-on sentences in news reports on the BBC News website? It's my job to put those in.
(I helped save b3ta! mofaha ┐( ˘_˘)┌ ʅ(́◡◝)ʃ, Wed 5 Jan 2011, 3:59, archived)
# don't worry about it
this part of the site is for crude photoshoppery
talk is for talking bollocks and being a prick
question of the week is for lies
and links is for posting interesting links and stuff you've made that isn't anything of the above
(I helped save b3ta! mictoboy shitting in your cunt since, Tue 4 Jan 2011, 22:31, archived)
#
Thanks.

For the heads up.
(I helped save b3ta! Newcott, Tue 4 Jan 2011, 22:35, archived)
# ^this should be the entire contents of the b3ta wikipedia article
(I helped save b3ta! Spunky McPunk not dead yet, Wed 5 Jan 2011, 8:09, archived)
# I think you're a bit early for Christmas

Some of the scenes are pretty good, others are bad.
(I helped save b3ta! mediocre ha ha ha, you're reading this, Tue 4 Jan 2011, 22:27, archived)
# Feedback?
Invest in better actors, or find less-wooden friends.
(I helped save b3ta! Captain Howdy, Tue 4 Jan 2011, 22:59, archived)
# Is recession over, pt. 2
hey guys what you think is recession over or we are up for really bad times especiallyy IT sector
(I helped save b3ta! drimble he'd been white, he'd been black, Tue 4 Jan 2011, 23:29, archived)
#
(Testicles just for you, Tue 4 Jan 2011, 23:59, archived)
# To be honest, I was put off by the running time.
If you are trying to make a viral, then in my opinion it needs to be short and snappy, as most people are not going to give up quarter of an hour to watch something without good reason.

The comment above about the credits is right - you are likely to lose viewers before it even starts if you don't instantly grab their interest.

That said, I skipped through bits, and it does look well shot and edited.
(I helped save b3ta! monkeon schmonkeon, Wed 5 Jan 2011, 2:13, archived)
# Thanks
Well we where aiming for a short film rather then a quick sketch - looking at the engagement we don't loose that many due to opening credits - people either watch or skip forward.

Would be nix to go viral don't get me wrong but we've had some awesome feedback so far.

Couple be more pleased with the Editor he did an amazing job with the issues we faced (for example the main actors where never in on the same day)

Always cheers all for watching :)
(I helped save b3ta! Newcott, Wed 5 Jan 2011, 10:20, archived)
# Bit of feedback
Fuck off over to links cock nose
(I helped save b3ta! Paul_P, Wed 5 Jan 2011, 8:38, archived)