Yeah - for sure - the sword should be passing behind her head.
I didnt comment on it though, because its a lot better than what i can do freehand.
EDIT - indeed it is better
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Fri 27 Jan 2012, 8:47,
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EDIT - indeed it is better
Yeah, the past few years haven't been kind to him
with Noel moving on to pastures new with Deal or no Deal.
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Fri 27 Jan 2012, 8:53,
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The handle perspective is different to the
perspective of the sword point, irrespective of how she's holding it, it's definitely Escher. (even more so now you've fiddled with it). ;)
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Fri 27 Jan 2012, 10:01,
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Yeah I noticed that too yours is better
but her left hand (right as you look at it) shouldn't be able to touch the end of the blade at that angle.
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Fri 27 Jan 2012, 10:04,
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she can if it's actually bent like a boomerang
have you never heard of the boomerang samurai? granted, they were never that famous, but they kind of had a cult following for a while. then obviously they were all butchered.
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Fri 27 Jan 2012, 11:34,
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I had a go at correcting the perspective not perfect but better I think.
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Fri 27 Jan 2012, 12:08,
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The right hand looks a little odd now
but this is a definite improvement :)
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Fri 27 Jan 2012, 12:13,
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Yeah didn't even attempt to fix the perspective on the hand I would have had to completely redraw it
I'd have thought someone as talented at drawing as Moggy wouldn't have got the perspective wrong in the first place but hey.
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Fri 27 Jan 2012, 12:17,
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could always have just held the sword with one hand and have it "thrusting upwards" in some kind of "sword" like manner
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Fri 27 Jan 2012, 12:14,
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yay!
yay!
Can't argue with that :)
edit: just wanted an excuse to post that link really :)
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Fri 27 Jan 2012, 12:37,
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Can't argue with that :)
edit: just wanted an excuse to post that link really :)
That's more like it.
I'm nominating you for the Neil Buchanan award for outstanding effort teaching kids how to do the art.
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