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# the board is of very high quality at the moment, so it's about time i ruined it with more fucking poetry
What I Did Today - this one's pretty dumb but i like it
Where Did I Go Wrong? - this is kinda shite, and i just noticed, too late to edit it, that the first verse really doesn't scan
Drum and Bass - dumb but short
Queueing by the Far Wall - this is based around a very weak play on words
Beulah the Country Star - this is based around an even weaker play on words
Where I Was When I Heard - this is shite, doesn't scan, and i'm not sure if i've made up the name of one of the people in the last line by accident. one of the Run DMC guys is called Reverend Run, right?
Lies I Have Told - a bit crap really
(I helped save b3ta! mikeisbrill, Wed 1 Oct 2003, 12:17, archived)
# Im like
a kid who picks up a book and flicks through it to look at the pictures, too many words give me headaches.
(I helped save b3ta! Kris Fucking Kristofferson, Wed 1 Oct 2003, 12:19, archived)
# Quality.
I love your poetry in a big gay way.
(I helped save b3ta! supermoore: HUNG, Wed 1 Oct 2003, 12:20, archived)
# Lots of kissing with tongues
and back alley groping?
(I helped save b3ta! charliedontsurf, Wed 1 Oct 2003, 12:24, archived)
# yay
Your stuff makes me laugh.
(I helped save b3ta! Craymen, Wed 1 Oct 2003, 12:22, archived)
# Yay for poms.
(I helped save b3ta! Samsonite, Wed 1 Oct 2003, 12:22, archived)
# yes!
hurrah for english people!
(I helped save b3ta! Lumpbucket tekcubpmuL, Wed 1 Oct 2003, 12:22, archived)
# and
apples!
(I helped save b3ta! butchbint, Wed 1 Oct 2003, 12:33, archived)
# Possibly potatoes
(I helped save b3ta! Mornington Crescent Come the Envolution ..., Wed 1 Oct 2003, 12:44, archived)
# Fookin' fantastic!
(I helped save b3ta! sick_boy, Wed 1 Oct 2003, 12:22, archived)
# Like the Run one.
Kewl.
(I helped save b3ta! pxyzyzygy, Wed 1 Oct 2003, 12:22, archived)
# Beulah the Country Star
is great.
(I helped save b3ta! Flapjack I spay a little mare for you, Wed 1 Oct 2003, 12:22, archived)
# haha
some quality stuff there, and some truly terrible puns! you should be proud and ashamed...
(I helped save b3ta! rogan, Wed 1 Oct 2003, 12:24, archived)
# far queue
all

splendid
(I helped save b3ta! Wildheart Baby. Drunken Mess In A Good Way, Wed 1 Oct 2003, 12:24, archived)