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Captain Howdy,
Mon 1 Feb 2010, 17:56,
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true this.i wrote my first short story ever. I only did it to annoy the missus and prove that it wasn't that hard, but i was rather pleased with the result nonetheless.
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monstrinho do biscoito teeeshurts = www.nogunarmy.com,
Mon 1 Feb 2010, 18:06,
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For those about to write, we salute you!Keep up the good work, sir.
( Captain Howdy,
Mon 1 Feb 2010, 18:10,
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nah, i've acheived my passive agressive belittlement of her hobby. i'm good :) (and joking)if you have a few minutes to spare you can read it at
www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1641071-All-the-Time-in-the-World
it's only 1100 words so it won't take you long.
and it has squirming things and the post human earth and the end of the world.
(www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1641071-All-the-Time-in-the-World
it's only 1100 words so it won't take you long.
and it has squirming things and the post human earth and the end of the world.
monstrinho do biscoito teeeshurts = www.nogunarmy.com,
Mon 1 Feb 2010, 18:14,
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What purpose immortality if you can't have an endless supply of wine, eh?Cheers!
( Captain Howdy,
Mon 1 Feb 2010, 18:21,
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it's probably the first thing i would install in my indestructable tower :) monstrinho do biscoito teeeshurts = www.nogunarmy.com,
Mon 1 Feb 2010, 18:23,
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Hmmm. It was good.I liked the connection between the light and the wine. And the trapped immortal theme.
Could do with some editing, though. A few sentence restructures, that sort of thing. (like I would know, I'm a scientician :)
(Could do with some editing, though. A few sentence restructures, that sort of thing. (like I would know, I'm a scientician :)
The Alchemist king of the needlessly complicated,
Mon 1 Feb 2010, 18:30,
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fair enuff. it was written in one go with no real editing. i may go back and tweak it if i can be arsed. monstrinho do biscoito teeeshurts = www.nogunarmy.com,
Mon 1 Feb 2010, 18:34,
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In one go? Then I am pretty impressed. The Alchemist king of the needlessly complicated,
Mon 1 Feb 2010, 18:39,
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in one go and half pissedi'm like hemingway me. well good at writin' 'n' shit.
( monstrinho do biscoito teeeshurts = www.nogunarmy.com,
Mon 1 Feb 2010, 18:47,
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excellent newsI have sketched out the first two episodes
Don't worry about episode 1/pilot or Antiques ;)
(Don't worry about episode 1/pilot or Antiques ;)
HappyToast Groat froth,
Mon 1 Feb 2010, 18:07,
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Then ours will be the only show with two first episodes.... huzzah!
( Captain Howdy,
Mon 1 Feb 2010, 18:12,
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i'm a plumber Jim! not a doctor! monstrinho do biscoito teeeshurts = www.nogunarmy.com,
Mon 1 Feb 2010, 18:22,
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battling imperial forces?there's an app for that
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Smash Monkey lowering the tone of the whole internet,
Mon 1 Feb 2010, 18:26,
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