It would have been better
if you could have started a sentence with an apostrophe on the second line, but still. 9.1/10 for the work, there.
( the mighty badger Aphrodite, on a bar stool, by your side, Tue 6 Jul 2010, 10:05, 1 reply, 16 years ago)

So far you seem to be the only one who has got the joke, well done!

( Agnostic Antichrist Baltimora, Tue 6 Jul 2010, 10:23, Reply)

I'd take that as a compliment from the others
if the lines were worse written or more contrived, people would have looked for a reason why.

that or I've got a more distorted mind.
( the mighty badger Aphrodite, on a bar stool, by your side, Tue 6 Jul 2010, 10:24, Reply)

I thought they were soppy as shit
And terribly written.

Seen as I'm not Edmund, I would have thought it obvious a joke
( Agnostic Antichrist Baltimora, Tue 6 Jul 2010, 10:27, Reply)

Oh yeah.
But this is /offtopic, you can never be sure what anyone will write or mean.

I meant more that they are all actually sentences, more or less, they scan more or less, and follow each other. I wasn't praising your poetic ability ;)
( the mighty badger Aphrodite, on a bar stool, by your side, Tue 6 Jul 2010, 10:29, Reply)

I would
It's shit, haha
( Agnostic Antichrist Baltimora, Tue 6 Jul 2010, 10:31, Reply)

Trouble is, with your heartfelt sensilibilities
and love of Keane, it wasn't at all obvious that you weren't just writing shit poetry. Also, she doesn't have a sister. Though I might give her sister in law a go.
(Bazongaloid, Tue 6 Jul 2010, 10:39, Reply)

You mean your sister?

(wellgroomedwookiee is a filthy-minded hobgoblin, Tue 6 Jul 2010, 10:40, Reply)

Aye, suppose
But just let me clear this up, I don't do poetry. Haven't written a single line since school (before today), and have no intention of doing so again.
( Agnostic Antichrist Baltimora, Tue 6 Jul 2010, 10:41, Reply)

I spotted it
well done.
( The Light in Chains don't touch the Pope's boner, Tue 6 Jul 2010, 10:30, Reply)

I don't get it.
Too subtle for the time of day.
(Bear Pookie The Frankly Challenged. Halloween is coming to town., Tue 6 Jul 2010, 10:52, Reply)

I spose someone will explain it to the rest of us sooner or later.

( Larry Vest One day at a time, sweet Jesus, FFS., Tue 6 Jul 2010, 10:58, Reply)

Read the capital letters down

( Agnostic Antichrist Baltimora, Tue 6 Jul 2010, 11:09, Reply)

way too fucking subtle for my brain this morning!

( Vipros. clever got me this far, then tricky got me in, Tue 6 Jul 2010, 11:22, Reply)

Whooshed me completely - I usually get acrostics.

( Larry Vest One day at a time, sweet Jesus, FFS., Tue 6 Jul 2010, 12:09, Reply)