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# jen-you-wine arts critic time
Working on a new pic. Trying out 2 different lighting / composition setups.

Which do you prefer? I can only choose 1, then ill work on the detailing. Its still very much a mock-up at the mo.

Im preferring the warm coloured one for composition and mood's sake.
Sorry for the watermark. I have my reasons, dammit!

A tribute of sorts to the finest site on the internet (NSFW)
slutsoft.tumblr.com/

(I helped save b3ta! taters Bah weep grahnah weep ninibong, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 22:19, archived)
# I like the one on the left, but I think she should cover up her tits like the one on the right is doing.
Also she should have a sandwich or something, look at the size of her.
(I helped save b3ta! zoldergoose, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 22:21, archived)
# am i going to get done for paedophilia,
looking at this?
(I helped save b3ta! Sir Sand GOBLIN ^popular page dis, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 22:22, archived)
#
cant a lady be skinny and asian without being classed as a thai kiddy prostitute?
(I helped save b3ta! taters Bah weep grahnah weep ninibong, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 22:23, archived)
# oh, didn't realise she was meant to be asian.
just looks like some kid to me.
(I helped save b3ta! Sir Sand GOBLIN ^popular page dis, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 22:25, archived)
# bah - i need to upgrade to version 2 of the asian look algorithm plugin
(I helped save b3ta! taters Bah weep grahnah weep ninibong, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 22:30, archived)
# Of course, sir, now get in with the nonces.

(Seance Trumpet has got no beef with a man enjoying a croissant, Mon 14 Sep 2009, 9:53, archived)
# Apologies for the water mark?
Is that really just water?
(I helped save b3ta! Marty McFly can't grate cheese without getting angry, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 22:22, archived)
# it's going to leave a mark, ultimately
(I helped save b3ta! discomeats This canoe, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 23:36, archived)
# ace(both)
the one on the left for me:)
(I helped save b3ta! Elvis impersonator, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 22:23, archived)
#
deux. that means two in foreign. I think.
(I helped save b3ta! RocketSurgeon is pretending he's still young, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 22:24, archived)
# Left: Well hello there
Right: post-coital
Quite hard to choose one as they both have their own merits. I'd want to see the right one finished. More intriguing
(I helped save b3ta! Bob the mul Don't look at me that way, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 22:24, archived)
# I like the first one better for the same reasons, diagonal lines and keeping still go together badly
The dark left side of the second picture is a bit empty. And her reflection has a massive blobby nose, but that may just be the S.

Which is the superior work?
Mini poll bar
Mini poll bar
(_Felix 's school of dance and occult sciences, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 22:27, archived)
# why is there no choice for 'Raising Arizona'
....cuz then I would vote here
(I helped save b3ta! PedroHin Come along & ride on a Flantastic Voyage, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 22:29, archived)
# I haven't heard of either, but I'm tempted to vote anyway to inflict upon you measurement error bias.
(I helped save b3ta! zoldergoose, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 22:29, archived)
# ^this
(I helped save b3ta! taters Bah weep grahnah weep ninibong, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 22:36, archived)
# she does have a big nose
but that blob you speak of is indeed the 's'

Ta for the opinion. I do like the one on the right, but its not as tidy, composition wise, and the added detail of the reflected fingers catches the eye too much, whereas the white window on the first one draws the eye into her face area.
Err.... i mean COCK WANK TEH QUO HENRY LOL
(I helped save b3ta! taters Bah weep grahnah weep ninibong, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 22:34, archived)
# one on the right with the blue
but with the constrasting orange interior light coming in from the left
(I helped save b3ta! HappyToast Groat froth, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 22:28, archived)
# And not at a diagonal angle, it's silly.
(_Felix 's school of dance and occult sciences, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 22:32, archived)
# nonsense, camera and pose are fine
just needs the inside and outside light
(I helped save b3ta! HappyToast Groat froth, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 22:35, archived)
# i thought of this,
but it looked odd. Its meant to be an overcast day outside, maybe rain on the window. Bounce light from inside would be blue, gray or a bit green. I quite like nudey photography with cold colours - its different. Click 'older photos at the bottom once, and the one with the water in her hands is a good example:
(nsfw) slutsoft.tumblr.com/
(I helped save b3ta! taters Bah weep grahnah weep ninibong, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 22:38, archived)
# Dirty Boy!
:D

But seriously, outside blue, soft orange edge light from lamp out of shot
(I helped save b3ta! HappyToast Groat froth, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 22:45, archived)
# That one seems to be mainly a dark spring green.
I reckon it's a sunny day outside the bathroom.
(_Felix 's school of dance and occult sciences, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 22:52, archived)
# Cameraman is falling over
I guess that adds an intriguing backstory.
(_Felix 's school of dance and occult sciences, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 22:41, archived)
# it worked for the first batman film :-)
(I helped save b3ta! taters Bah weep grahnah weep ninibong, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 22:35, archived)
# Batman was mostly jumping off buildings
not leaning languorously against a window.
(_Felix 's school of dance and occult sciences, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 22:40, archived)
# it's a bit low poly, is it for a game?
and put some clothes on that child for goodness sake
(I helped save b3ta! VampireMonkeyOnSpeed a super sexy sexual sex terrorist sex, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 22:32, archived)
# left
though i'm not sure i like the face (in either to be honest - it's less noticeable in the left one i guess)
(I helped save b3ta! kingsuperspecial is in an audience, wanking furiously, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 22:34, archived)
# the face is a bit odd
but thats the point. I wanted to give her a big nose, fat cheeks and see if she still has appeal.
Shes a sort of caricature based on these pics of this lady i saw:
wakarimasenlol.com/2009/08/02/gallery-doa-kasumi-cosplay-blue-costume/3091
(I helped save b3ta! taters Bah weep grahnah weep ninibong, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 22:47, archived)
# i see what you're going for
if you go for the second one - put a cigarette in her hand (it looks like she's holding one already anyway)
(I helped save b3ta! kingsuperspecial is in an audience, wanking furiously, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 23:14, archived)
# ooo
good idea
(I helped save b3ta! taters Bah weep grahnah weep ninibong, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 23:22, archived)
# the one on the right
I prefer the pose, & the colours are are a nice balance - in the left, the skin tones are too close to the background

very WOO, btw!
(I helped save b3ta! theoriginalsteve <this space intentionally left blank>, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 22:49, archived)
# 2
nice reflecting :)
(JoePesky, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 22:57, archived)
# Nice watermark. It's a nice simple typeface but the artifacts make it appear blurry, which looks bad on a font which should really have clarity and sharp, defined edges.
It's a font I probably wouldn't use myself.
(I helped save b3ta! Ttssattsr, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 23:03, archived)
# i went for that retro charm
its actually a good watermark font because those jagged edges stand out a lot, and they would be a bastard to clone out or smudge into the image.
(I helped save b3ta! taters Bah weep grahnah weep ninibong, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 23:09, archived)
# Why would someone steal a low res image?
(I helped save b3ta! Ttssattsr, Sun 13 Sep 2009, 23:17, archived)
# can you make me a real woman, taters?
I don't even know how you make the nose
 
(I helped save b3ta! Rapitinui get in the cage and I'll give you a treat, Mon 14 Sep 2009, 1:07, archived)