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# Broken Wings

(old idea, brand new drawing........................................could i have your honest opinion please)
(I helped save b3ta! atomic A-bomb-a-nation, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:03, archived)
# *bums*
(I helped save b3ta! mr horrible up yours, dickface, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:04, archived)
# Nice drawing.
(I helped save b3ta! An Egg ,D, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:04, archived)
# It's quite nice.
She's got a funny thumb. And you've given her wings, people don't have wings.
(_Felix 's school of dance and occult sciences, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:05, archived)
# They do if they drink Generic High-Caffeine Soda
(I helped save b3ta! Tribs 🦇 ↓ dn ʎɐʍ sᴉɥʇ ↓🦇, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:07, archived)
# Voted "Best"!
(I helped save b3ta! The Alchemist king of the needlessly complicated, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:08, archived)
# Not sure why she's in that pose actually.
Possible reasons:
1) Invisible bumming
2) Just been swatted, recovering.
(_Felix 's school of dance and occult sciences, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:08, archived)
# It's night,she was flying like a good fairy, it got windy and she fell through the trees,...
...and her wings got messed up.
(I helped save b3ta! atomic A-bomb-a-nation, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:13, archived)
# Now she's all vulnerable and coincidentally presenting her arse
I hope nothing SEXY happens.
(_Felix 's school of dance and occult sciences, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:16, archived)
# Well...the trees got wood.
(I helped save b3ta! atomic A-bomb-a-nation, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:18, archived)
# would
(nicely drawn)
(I helped save b3ta! Mockingbird Practitioner of SCIENCE, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:05, archived)
# Very nicely drawn! :D
(I helped save b3ta! ClanSoul, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:06, archived)
# General consensus of "nice".
(_Felix 's school of dance and occult sciences, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:13, archived)
# I like this.
But she should get those wings looked at.
(I helped save b3ta! Tribs 🦇 ↓ dn ʎɐʍ sᴉɥʇ ↓🦇, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:07, archived)
# I like the framing of the figure by the trees, but the way her hair falls over her neck obscures it a little.
Overall, the look is nice - the wings look a lot like sycamore leaves, and her clothing is appropriately woodland-y.
(I helped save b3ta! The Alchemist king of the needlessly complicated, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:08, archived)
# fairy being bummed by the invisable man.
that grapes my squildo.

WOO! top drawage.
(I helped save b3ta! Thor_sonofodin has done things, terrible things on, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:09, archived)
# Is that the Illuminati sigil I see on her armband?
(I helped save b3ta! Mu Dinofiddler, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:11, archived)
# quick kill it before it turns into lizard form.
(I helped save b3ta! Thor_sonofodin has done things, terrible things on, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:14, archived)
# Beautiful attenton to detail
just been trying my hand at drawing again but mine is poor to say the least.
(I helped save b3ta! maiden is filmed before a live studio audience, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:12, archived)
# If I came upon a marvelous setting like this . . . I would stay !
(I helped save b3ta! Valin I changed glasses while I wasn't looking, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:12, archived)
# It's shit, the proportions are all wrong and the shading is crap.
No just kidding, my honest opinion is the exact opposite of everything I just said.

*click*
(Peter_G, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:17, archived)
# It's shit...I knew it!...*Waaaah*... :'(
(I helped save b3ta! atomic A-bomb-a-nation, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:20, archived)
# Excellent detail
But if you're after picking then there's something a litte off in the perspective but I can't put my finger on it (which means it's probably me not you).
(I helped save b3ta! Cadmus has teh uplikn coeds at, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:18, archived)
# The trees in the background are all roughly the same size
which means they must be growing in a clump, in the way that trees don't.
Or else the trunks get wider as the trees get further away, causing an unfortunate natural inverted trompe l'oeil effect.
(_Felix 's school of dance and occult sciences, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:22, archived)
# Do not expect to find perspective in these woods...
...these lands are forsaken!
(I helped save b3ta! atomic A-bomb-a-nation, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:23, archived)
# Probably the angle of thighs and knee positon vs torso position
but, who am I to provide a critique... I couldn't draw anything approaching a million miles of this. It's excellence on a stick!
(I helped save b3ta! printmeister http://tinyurl.com/c8s8fd5 for titanic T's, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:24, archived)
# a nude girl posed for me...
...i only draw what i see.... :)
(I helped save b3ta! atomic A-bomb-a-nation, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:26, archived)
# Nice picture.
But why does she have skis on her fucking knees?
(I helped save b3ta! Redsushi! Whoop! Whoop! Yes, that one!, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:21, archived)
# Bunny Slope.
(I helped save b3ta! atomic A-bomb-a-nation, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:24, archived)
# That is not a real thing!
(I helped save b3ta! Redsushi! Whoop! Whoop! Yes, that one!, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:28, archived)
# A child's ski trail... for beginners...
...she skis on her knees...oh, nevermind.
(I helped save b3ta! atomic A-bomb-a-nation, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:43, archived)
# Shin protection, innit
she gets in battles with lots of kicking. That or skateboarding.
(_Felix 's school of dance and occult sciences, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:25, archived)
# I'd say
quality illustration.

to nit pick, the figure merges rather with the background, particularly the arms/hair/head/arse. Maybe a bit of simultaneous contrast to pull it out (oo err missus)
(I helped save b3ta! lord bofingham, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:27, archived)
# sweet details
(I helped save b3ta! Shada, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:38, archived)
# Thanks...it's unfortunate that you can't see all the detail...
...the computer screen just dilutes it to hell... :(
(I helped save b3ta! atomic A-bomb-a-nation, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 18:47, archived)
#
(I helped save b3ta! Tahkcalb ω∞ for sigs, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 20:50, archived)
# FUCKING ACE, MAN!....!(0)(0)!
(I helped save b3ta! atomic A-bomb-a-nation, Thu 5 Nov 2009, 21:17, archived)