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# Helleaux
Im looking for some quick feedback for a new thing im working on, and where better than the quickest-est forum in the west?
Its a caricature of Gaylen Ross from Dawn of the dead. Gonna be full of 70s glamour goodness. Still needs a lot more work, but im just wondering which of the poses y'alls prefer?

the hands on C and D should be relaxed, but im too lazy.

(, Tue 7 Dec 2010, 18:06, archived)
# I can't see past the mannequin hands on C, D
so I'll say B
(, Tue 7 Dec 2010, 18:07, archived)
# Im sneakily thinking B too
because its the easiest and least effort.

Plus, natural lookin cartoon hands are hard. Especially when you see them as close as these.

Also, you get a nice bit of rim lighting on her boob - good for the sihlouette and a quick read of the shape.
(, Tue 7 Dec 2010, 18:09, archived)
# "rim lighting" pfffttttttttttt ;)
Look it's late on a very cold Tuesday....
(, Tue 7 Dec 2010, 18:11, archived)
# B or C for me
(, Tue 7 Dec 2010, 18:08, archived)
# A or B for me.
Leaning more towards B.
Also, needs more pokies.
(, Tue 7 Dec 2010, 18:11, archived)
# Ok
Ill put squirtle sitting on her shoulder then
(, Tue 7 Dec 2010, 18:22, archived)
# I'd rather a bit of caterpie rummaging about in her hair,
but otherwise squirtle will have to do.
(, Tue 7 Dec 2010, 18:35, archived)
# A does the trick . . . the others will have to wait their turn !
(, Tue 7 Dec 2010, 18:12, archived)
# C I think
D looks a bit too rigid....good caricaturing
(, Tue 7 Dec 2010, 18:15, archived)
# B
must do better ;)
Edit:though it depends what you are going for, what is she emoting?
(, Tue 7 Dec 2010, 18:15, archived)
# I dunno really
shes just standing there looking nice.

Guess i should go for B. I thought it was the laziest, most unintresting one, but really, most people stand with their arms down!

I was going to do a pic of her with that strange wide-eyed, worried kind of look she has throughout most of the film, but i wanted to do a very 1970s esque soft-focus glamour type image.
(, Tue 7 Dec 2010, 18:24, archived)
# Boobs
B
(, Tue 7 Dec 2010, 18:17, archived)
# C
I like C
(, Tue 7 Dec 2010, 18:19, archived)
# The hands should be on a CDC
(, Tue 7 Dec 2010, 18:24, archived)
# sculpted realistically in zbrush
but with 3 pubes per ball, and shaded 100% magenta, with no shadows.
(, Tue 7 Dec 2010, 18:25, archived)
# I'd suggest you do away with the lipstick, as she doesn't have any or most of the film
Unless it's at the point where she's tarted up and having dinner with the dude in the mall.

I like A, personally. Lovely work you do!
(, Tue 7 Dec 2010, 18:24, archived)
# hm - i dunno. I was taking photos of my telly all the while i was watching the blue ray of it
and she has very red lips for the majority of the film. Of course, she's got mega slappery makeup on that bit with the mirror. Ill avoid that level of slap!
(, Tue 7 Dec 2010, 18:26, archived)
# Is recession over
Sorry, quick TJ: while everyone's in Dawn mode, something that has been bugging me for many a year: the scene in the supermarket, where Stephen and Peter both pick up an item of food (sausages I think from memory) and compare them. Stephen says "What do you think?", Peter replies and then they both laugh. Anyone have an idea what he says? I have trawled the internets looking for the answer but re-emerged unfulfilled.
(, Tue 7 Dec 2010, 19:14, archived)
# B, please Bob
the face has enough features to make it the central focus. Anything like the arm/hand addition just takes away from that focus point
(, Tue 7 Dec 2010, 18:28, archived)
# good point, sir.
(, Tue 7 Dec 2010, 18:50, archived)
# c please
(, Tue 7 Dec 2010, 18:30, archived)
# A or B
But what do I know.
(, Tue 7 Dec 2010, 18:34, archived)
# You know A or B, thats what!
Ill have a think, and try and choose between A (more intresting, could have some nice creases on her sleeve) or B (more compositionally 'neat', quicker)

Cheers beers y'alls
(, Tue 7 Dec 2010, 18:38, archived)
# A
this isn't really helping, is it?

EDIT: I should also say that this is very good indeed.
(, Tue 7 Dec 2010, 18:38, archived)
# A
(, Tue 7 Dec 2010, 18:42, archived)
# B
Incredible, also.
\o/
(, Tue 7 Dec 2010, 18:43, archived)
# I think B
(, Tue 7 Dec 2010, 18:58, archived)
# ignore everyone else, it's A clearly
(, Tue 7 Dec 2010, 19:13, archived)
# why not let HER decide
*harumph*

i like them all DONTMAKEMECHOOSE
(, Tue 7 Dec 2010, 19:15, archived)
# Ive asked her 47 times
BUT SHE WONT ANSWER

Is she dead??? Am i going to jales?
(, Tue 7 Dec 2010, 19:33, archived)
# A or C
Looking good already!
(, Tue 7 Dec 2010, 19:24, archived)
# fuck
doll
(, Tue 7 Dec 2010, 19:24, archived)