I think
you've judged a book by its cover. The hand drawn maps are to give it an original feel. The brief montage was posted a few days ago, guess you missed that one.
2 minutes into your review and ive disregarded it on the basis that if you dont give something a chance then im not going to give you a chance. Which is a shame cuz i like your work HappyToast.
Edit: Just a bit peeved at my first response being about a poor choice of font thats all, skip thru to the 24minute mark for a good battle scene
(, Tue 16 Aug 2011, 10:52, Reply)
he makes very reasonable points though
you're expecting people to give it a chance, yet he's just quite sensibly explained why people won't actually bother - esp for an hour. I did 10 mins, good effort - but those titles....
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SpunkyBackpack, Tue 16 Aug 2011, 11:01,
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Let me know what you think
unless you don't like it.
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evil_andy Stick stick stick stick sticky sticky stick stick, Tue 16 Aug 2011, 11:07,
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TBF
HappyToast is only trying to be helpful, and he does raise some valid points.. the first 2 minutes aren't engaging enough to justify spending the next 50 minutes watching the rest. I'm sure you've put a lot of effort into it, but 50 mins is a long time to invest, especially on the internet where most people switch off after 10 seconds..
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Rusty Shackleford www.junt.co.uk / @joeyrobbo, Tue 16 Aug 2011, 11:08,
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I think HappyToasts' comments do reflect
the average internet user who will
1) Judge a book by its cover - right or wrong, a nice font might reduce the chance of it being clicked off before people give it a chance.
2) Want instant rewards. Most usability research suggests people skim read the internet. People need to know that it's worth their time before investing their time. A few exciting clips up-front are likely to encourage people to keep watching.
That said, good work getting it made, though I would question the wisdom of more people unnecessarily going onto the streets at the time.
edit: Having watched it now, I'd say that it could do being a bit more Jon Ronson and a bit less Nathan Barley. It seems a bit too "LOL riot" in places, and zooming in on someone lying apparently injured in the street seemed quite cold. Mocking the police's response for asking you to go home, rather than questioning what you are doing there seemed to highlight the lack of objective awareness that a documentary really needs. That said, it was pretty watchable, even if for morbid curiosity reasons.
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monkeon schmonkeon, Tue 16 Aug 2011, 11:11,
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I quote you Jerome K Jerome
George got quite huffy; but, as Harris said, if he didn’t want his opinion, why did he ask for it?
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Fray Brentos *mega-belms*, Tue 16 Aug 2011, 11:11,
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it IS a shame...
... bearing in mind I've seen HappyToast drunkenly crying onto his keyboard due to people criticising his work, he's being a little bit flippant about it all...
but, hey, what do I know?!
(, Tue 16 Aug 2011, 11:28, Reply)
can't recall ever doing such a thing
drunkenly crying over the beauty of a Maru video perhaps, but not about any criticism any one has levelled at my work
but I'm sure you're right.
Are you going to critique the other people that have posted criticisms now or do you just have a thing against me?
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HappyToast Groat froth, Tue 16 Aug 2011, 11:34,
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it wasn't actually about a critique of your work...
but you were being fucking sensitive none-the-less
b3ta.com/board/6620349
(, Tue 16 Aug 2011, 11:41, Reply)
After digging back a bit further, it appears that it was you who was complaining there, I was explaining to the person what you had said
b3ta.com/board/6620305
Why did you pick that link? Seems a bit of an odd one to remember and incorrectly pull out of the air
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HappyToast Groat froth, Tue 16 Aug 2011, 11:56,
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What does that have to do with anything here?
as you're doing a great job of backing me up about, you get very sensitive on here - so I find it a little strange you'd offhandedly dismiss someone's work in such a way.
Regardless of what you think, this person has spent more than five minutes on the project and it's his own work... So I'd expect - from you at least - a more constructive criticism
(, Tue 16 Aug 2011, 12:02, Reply)
I'm not being sensitive, I'm being confused by what you're going on about :D
you started by saying I cried drunkenly in to my keyboard when someone criticizes my work, as evidence you then posted a link to me saying "I'm too pissed to care" about the file size of someone's image that you had commented on that you had remembered from 5 years ago.
Is that not just a little odd?
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HappyToast Groat froth, Tue 16 Aug 2011, 12:09,
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jesus...
look up there^^^^ "it wasn't actually about a critique of your work... "
so that's that bit sorted...
The fact remains that - in that sub thread - hence why it was the only bit posted, that you were drunk and being over sensitive... I have a good memory; what's wrong with that? I remember most things that have been said on here...
aaaaaanyway... due to said sensitivity, I am surprised by the flippancy... is it really THAT hard to understand? Am I typing this in a foreign language or something?
(, Tue 16 Aug 2011, 12:13, Reply)
*gently fans the flames*
*runs and gets some petrol, just in case*
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wideeye slightly pickled, Tue 16 Aug 2011, 12:20,
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hahaha
Yes, I said I was drunk, you're spot on there.
But if you mean the one reply after you call me a cunt was where I'm being sensitive, that was because I'd had a load of hate gaz mail at that time so was questioning if you meant it, nothing more, nothing less.
These are simple, calm questions, no sensitive weirdness.
Can you not see how strange it is though that you have brought up such an event like it was of major importance?
I tell you one thing I am guilty of though, and that's enjoying a nice long conversation and getting to the bottom of things ;)
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HappyToast Groat froth, Tue 16 Aug 2011, 12:21,
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Pfft
Hate Gaz?
I gazzed you once. Asked you to Zombie me.
You ignored me.
*cries*
Cheers
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Legless Mister Stabby - shanks for the memory, Tue 16 Aug 2011, 13:59,
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You''l have to await the Zombie Apocalypse
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maiden is filmed before a live studio audience, Tue 16 Aug 2011, 14:14,
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are you over reacting?
I simply questioned why you were only complaining about my comments.
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HappyToast Groat froth, Tue 16 Aug 2011, 11:57,
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quite simply..... because it was the first reply... and quite arsey in tone
(, Tue 16 Aug 2011, 12:03, Reply)
ahh, there's your problem
you interpreted tone from the written word
very easy to get wrong
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HappyToast Groat froth, Tue 16 Aug 2011, 12:14,
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but, you see, if I misinterpreted it from the written word...
the fella in question probably did too
(, Tue 16 Aug 2011, 12:16, Reply)
*opens popcorn*
*slips nob through hole in bottom*
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Tab Hunter Make this useless process end and so, begin again, Tue 16 Aug 2011, 12:09,
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boy-butter
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Tab Hunter Make this useless process end and so, begin again, Tue 16 Aug 2011, 12:42,
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